What really stood out here, is the amount of frame-by-frame animation. I think it was pretty cool how you lessened the tweens and used them only when appropriate. The animation itself was smooth and I see you've made a giant improvement. The art style was pretty nice and I noticed some pretty crisp line work being done. I found the story somewhat confusing at the start however, it made sense in the end so I guess you redeemed yourself at that point. Also the music was really really fitting so nice work on that.
The only problem was that the proportions were frequently off when characters moved. I understand that its a huge pain trying to make characters the same size on every frame so I can't blame you for that. It was still good that you went ahead and attempted more frame by frame than usual.
All in all, this was a really good toon. Wish ya luck in the open round bro