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[Cellar]

the animation is pretty choppy and stale but whatever. i guess its good for a first animation. good job bro. you got real potential

ismisemick responds:

appreciate it :)

[Adrellia Village #42: SE]

the story its self was very well written and also some of the humor was pretty funny. the backgrounds and the character designs were also great but the only bad thing about this is how the characters feel very stiff. there is no animation from them apart from some tweened arm movement.

Anyways, this came out pretty good. Only some of the animation was a let down.

MistyE responds:

Thanks for your review, I'll try to incorporate more movement in the future episodes.

[Sonic and Friends]

the loading screen drawing made me think that this was going to be a quality animation but they you just fucked it up with shitty lip syncing, improper dialogue, horrible animation and a really bad concept, The only reason that this got daily first is because of the publishing outage so this was probably one of the few shitty submissions.

Also knuckles's personality is basically copying egoraptor's knuckles. if you actually had some general recognition of the sonic series then you would have changed him.

err.. i guess the only good thing is that the drawings are pretty decent but when they move then it looks bad.

Pandatsuki responds:

humm your comment is funny :P i mean it's obviously a hater's comment , at least i got more viewers than your last animation in 3 days >_> and i need support because it's my first animation here
your comment is useless but i just clicked "helpful" because you are a baby .

[Night in the Rain]

WARNING! LONG AND DEEP REVIEW THAT WILL SYSTEMATICALLY HELP IMPROVE YOUR WORK:

Ok. lets start with the most obvious and annoying downside, the animation is dull. There is like no actual animation whats-so-ever. Its just 1 drawing thats tweened heavily. Perhaps next time you could at least apply some frame by frame animation to give more sense to the movement. The only actual movement that i could identify were the eyes when they blink which isn't enough if you want to make a quality cartoon.

Another problem is the subject matter it's self. Why would you make a music video to an unknown song and how did you find the motivation to do it? The plot is both cliche and boring, you need to spread out the main points more and add important detail.

Also the backgrounds were badly drawn. They had all the important detail however the lines were way too thick. I suggest that next time when you draw straight lines for buildings or something, use the line tool, don't use the brush tool. Furthermore, the backgrounds need at least some depth. Try putting some shadows or blurs.

Despite some problems, I actually liked the character design. I know its just plain blobs with eyes but there is something about your art style that made them believable.

This cartoon isn't horrible. I don't know whether this was meant to be a quick test or an actual effort worthy toon but just remember that there is a ton of space for improvement. I hope to see more quality cartoons from you in the future. Just take your time and try your best.

MistyE responds:

Thank you for the long and detalied review. This was meant to be a test to see the best thing I could come up with in two hours. My next cartoon will be a lot better.

[A Hellbenders Christmas]

this wasnt as funny as appaloosa and it didn't have enough gross out humor however i found Chris and Zach "lovable" in this episode. They were actually kinda cute. No homo.

psychicpebbles responds:

We wanted our characters to do murder less people since it was Christmas and try to give them more depth. Thanks!

[Give Me A Sign]

the song was a great choice but there was way too much reused frames

MistyE responds:

Thanks for your input. Next time i should choose a song where i actually have lots of ideas for

[Canis lupus]

this makes me feel so high

golfinho responds:

pasoka!

[Adrellia Village #40: SE]

the animation was great but i had no idea what was going on

MistyE responds:

Oh, I'll have to make it more clear in the next episode I guess. Thanks for the review!

[Pleasure Island 4]

wow that was amazing. it was very funny and original. the unrealistic fast paced fighting gave the feel a comedic effect and gooseman's layed back personality is well... awesome.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks!

[Thank you Edd.]

awww, this is so saaaaddd... its been nearly a week since i heard edd passed away so now im sad again

Yusuf responds:

sorry to hear that :( thanks for the 5 though!