sweetcommando's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TOME Episode 06]

the animation and concept it really good but to be honest, this is soooo boring. i only smiled at the jokes like once and this goes on for like 15 minutes. i have seen all the TOME eps out so far and they are still entertaining to watch. just add more jokes to it and more action.

[Game Grumps: The Movie]

the be honest, that wasnt your funniest cartoon but it was still pretty funny. who ever did arin's voice totally nailed it. also the animation quality is pretty high but not very smooth. well done anyways

[Eddsworld - The Snogre]

i would write a long a descriptive review that praises the animation quality and music however i can not put them into words. I am so glad that you guys are continuing edd's show

[Mario Meets Patrick Star]

the animation is very fluid and well done but you could have used your time to make something more intresting

[Happy Plane]

the music was extremely catchy and the animation was cute. However it does seem abit pixilated. Did you turn it into a gif or something?

[Night in the Rain]

WARNING! LONG AND DEEP REVIEW THAT WILL SYSTEMATICALLY HELP IMPROVE YOUR WORK:

Ok. lets start with the most obvious and annoying downside, the animation is dull. There is like no actual animation whats-so-ever. Its just 1 drawing thats tweened heavily. Perhaps next time you could at least apply some frame by frame animation to give more sense to the movement. The only actual movement that i could identify were the eyes when they blink which isn't enough if you want to make a quality cartoon.

Another problem is the subject matter it's self. Why would you make a music video to an unknown song and how did you find the motivation to do it? The plot is both cliche and boring, you need to spread out the main points more and add important detail.

Also the backgrounds were badly drawn. They had all the important detail however the lines were way too thick. I suggest that next time when you draw straight lines for buildings or something, use the line tool, don't use the brush tool. Furthermore, the backgrounds need at least some depth. Try putting some shadows or blurs.

Despite some problems, I actually liked the character design. I know its just plain blobs with eyes but there is something about your art style that made them believable.

This cartoon isn't horrible. I don't know whether this was meant to be a quick test or an actual effort worthy toon but just remember that there is a ton of space for improvement. I hope to see more quality cartoons from you in the future. Just take your time and try your best.

MistyE responds:

Thank you for the long and detalied review. This was meant to be a test to see the best thing I could come up with in two hours. My next cartoon will be a lot better.

[Meanwhile, at Adobe]

the animation is perfect however the joke was very dry. besides, didnt you already make a flash that mocks flash?