not feeling it
the animation and voices were... good but the story and script was a pile of shit. the humour was flat and the characters were crap. i don't mean crap like they were poorly acted and had no feelings, i mean that they have the same personalties. they are all ignorant or stupid at times.
also this was very very cheesy (or whatever its called)! i cant really put it into words but i have a strong point about it. I'll try to explain; the characters were saying stuff that was very obvious. i have seen this a lot of times in good submissions which was why they were good but not great. this flash was pretty much good if it has less of the characters saying EVERYTHING they were thinking and more of getting straight to the point. i know its hard to get the viewer to understand whats going on without the characters saying anything about it but this was too obvious and all that was unnecessary.
ok, i hope you get the point. this wasnt all that bad but what i said in the review was a huuuuge let down. if you uploaded this a year earlier before all this good stuff kept coming in then this would have been scratching perfection.